Excess can be illustrated in many ways

Excessive

This is Ollie’s third outing my flash fiction. Let me know if you’d like to see more of her in the comments below. The door creaked and dust puffed up from the floor. I twitched my nose looking into the room. Shelf, after shelf, after shelf. Each filled with more books than I’d wanted to…
Am I under arrest, or not

Trouble

I watched Inspector Wittkower ignore the throng, offkey sirens, and acrid stench of a train burning. No. Fairness demanded noting a train wasn’t burning. A lone engine belched smoke not steam. A small one. Hardly worth fussing.

Still Wittkower ignored all and the responders parted about him and the lady he spoke with. Her genteel clothes didn’t belong here. Jacket, bustle, skirts. All screamed breeding. This was a place of poverty.

She waited to see who would win

The Prize

May opened her fan. If the day wasn't going to provide a breeze she'd try whipping up the heat drunk air herself.

“Scorching, isn't it?” Eula said idly.

“Hmm,” May hummed without commitment. She glanced over the plain the stands viewed. Yes, there was the trail of steam headed this way.